Tuesday, April 30, 2013

NaPoWriMo #30: Storm

The storm leaves
on giant bat wings.

It flies blind
over mountain and farm
with thunderous flaps
and suddenly stops.

--April 30, 2013
Prompt: Choose a poem and re-write it by putting in as many opposite words as you can.  

Original:

Fog
by Carl Sandburg

The fog comes
on little cat feet.

It sits looking
over harbor and city
on silent haunches
and then moves on

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