Showing posts with label children's books. Show all posts
Showing posts with label children's books. Show all posts

Friday, August 24, 2018

On Sale Today for 99 Cents: Three Floating Coffins

My second novel, Three Floating Coffins, is having a Countdown Sale on Amazon. The deal is, for today only, you can download the Kindle version for 99 cents. Tomorrow, the book goes up to $1.99. Sunday, it goes up to $2.99. And Monday it goes back to its normal price of $3.99. You can purchase it here. (The paperback version is still $15.00)


What happens when you can no longer trust your family? That's what 13-year old Princess Odele wonders when her father seals her and her two older sister in three floating coffins and cast them into the sea. Now, Odele must find new allies and uncover old secrets if she is to save her sisters and her kingdom. Full of magic, mystery, and adventure, Three Floating Coffins fighting to discover the truth and the power within herself.

For more details, see my website:
http://www.rebeccalangstories.com/three-floating-coffins.html

So, why am I having this deal? Well, I've entered Three Floating Coffins in an Amazon contest and the grand prize is $10,000. However, part of the judging is based on how many sales and reviews my book generates. Right now, I don't have a lot of either, so I'm hoping to boost it. At the very least, I'm hoping for more people to find and enjoy my book. While I am incredibly grateful for the love and support from my family and friends, I want to spread my story to people outside my circle. I believe it has a positive message for many people.

You can listen to me read the prologue and the first chapter of Three Floating Coffins in the videos below.

Rebecca Reads the Prologue


Rebecca Reads Chapter 1


If you do buy and read the book, please review it on Amazon. That, again, would really help me out, because the more reviews, the more likely other people, scanning the list, will buy it. It doesn't have to be long. Five minutes is all it takes. If you're unsure how to write a review, I wrote a blog entry about how to review on Amazon here

Wednesday, June 20, 2018

Presenting My Newest Book... Three Floating Coffins

Three Floating Coffins... On Sale Now!
I'm proud to share with you, my newest book, a magical fairy tale adventure that took me six years to write... Three Floating Coffins. All the juicy details are covered in the video below, but if you'd rather not see me talk (and I can't say I blame you--I HATE seeing myself on video), keep on reading.


In the Kingdom of the Seven Isles, a priest has prophesied that one of the three princesses holds a dangerous magic that will destroy the land. The only way to save the realm is to cast out the princesses in three floating coffins. The guilty one will sink and the innocent ones wash safely to shore. Only youngest princess Odele knows the truth. The priest is lying.



Separated from her family, hurt, and on the run, Odele begins a quest to find the one thing that may save her kingdom: a magical amulet that her mother hid somewhere on the Seven Isles. As she delves deeper into the family past, she unearths shocking family secrets and realizes she has more power than she knows. Will it be enough to save her family from the dark plans of the evil priest?


Three Floating Coffins reads like a fairy tale, with all the classic elements you know and love: princesses, dragons, magical amulets, clever urchin boys, mysterious quests, and evil villains. However, I put my own twists on these elements, and it goes deeper beyond the simple surface.


I wrote this book for upper elementary school readers in mind--6th grade or so. However, I think that anyone can enjoy this story, no matter their age. Three Floating Coffins is also a stand alone novel, not part of any series. It's available for Kindle at $3.99 or paperback (352 pages) for $15.00, and you can order both on Amazon or order the paperback on Createspace. I'm working to get a copy for Nook, as well.

If you want to know more, I posted my prologue and first chapter on my website. You can read the prologue here or chapter one here. In the future I might actually read them out loud and post them on my YouTube account, but we'll see what happens with that.

Please check out my book. If you buy and read it, please review it, as I really, really need the reviews. (If you're not sure how to write reviews on Amazon, please click here.)  And if you think you someone you know may like it, tell them as well. 

If you have any questions about me or my book, post in the comments and I'll do my best to answer. Thanks for your support!

Friday, October 16, 2015

Book Review: The Seventh Magpie

Title: The Seventh Magpie
Author: Nancy Chase
Genre: Fantasy, Fairy Tale, Middle Grade Reader

Summary

On the day she's about to be sent to an abbey, Princess Catrin receives a valuable gift from her mother: a little golden book encrusted with jewels that contains the Best Story in the World. The book is magic, given to Catrin's mother by the Magpies, shapeshifting birds who cast powerful illusions. The Magpies warn Catrin never to read more than one page a day.

She doesn't listen.

In the aftermath of a tragic disaster, Catrin goes on a quest to recover the Best Story in the World. But second chances don't come easy. The Magpies strike a bargain with Catrin. Every day for seven days, she must answer a riddle--and if she fails, she will lose what's most precious in the world to her. Catrin accepts. Little does she know that she'll have to fight harder than she's ever fought before if she wants to win the Magpies' game.

Review

I assumed this would be a simple, light-hearted little children's story.

My mistake.

You can't blame me for thinking it would be simple. The story begins with a classic fairy tale set up: Princess Catrin is unhappy. She's spent most of her life locked away and neglected; she finds true love, only for her father to force her to marry someone else. Her unhappiness leads to disaster, but surely it's nothing a little magic can't fix?

Since this is a fairy tale, magic just happens, without rules, without reason, and the characters just go with it. For the most part, I went with it, too, though I did have a few  nagging questions, such as: What was the book supposed to do? Why did her mother give it to her? Was it really worth the mess it caused?

Initially, I thought the characters were a bit one-dimensional. Catrin, in particular, didn't seem able to do anything for herself. I wasn't impressed with her. But I liked the riddles, and I cared enough about the characters to keep reading.

And then, around Riddle #4, things started to get dark.

By dark, I don't mean violent or gruesome. Instead, something happened that made me realize the chaos Catrin unleashed had real, deadly consequences. Suddenly, I began to wonder if magic really would tie everything in a nice, neat "happily-ever-after" bow.

I have to say, I liked the darkness. As the story progressed, the riddles became more personal, the conversations more philosophical. Catrin suffered more, lost more, worked harder, made difficult decisions, and ultimately grew into a complex, fully-realized character.

The ending left me stunned. I didn't know what was real and what wasn't. But I didn't really mind. The story moved me and lingered in my mind. It was an imaginative, fast-paced tale, and it made me feel, which to me is the number one thing.

By the way, kudos to Katrina Sesum for the lovely, full-page illustrations at the beginning of each chapter. I wanted to print them out and color them.

Tuesday, September 1, 2015

Series Review: The Underland Chronicles (Gregor the Overlander)


Series: The Underland Chronicles
Author: Suzanne Collins
Genre: Children's Book/ Middle Grade Reader, Fantasy, Adventure


Series Overview

Since his father disappeared, it's up to 11-year-old Gregor to look after his younger sisters, while his mother struggles to put food on the table. When toddler sister Boots tumbles through a hole in the laundry grate, Gregor doesn't hesitate to leap in after her. What he finds below is a dark, cavernous world populated by giant rats, bats, and bugs that live beside normal-sized humans with translucent skin and violet eyes.

Led by soon-to-be-queen Luxa, the humans of Underland rule a magnificent glowing city called Regalia and train incessantly to do battle with their mortal enemies, the Gnawers (or, as Overlanders call them, rats). Gregor's arrival is enough to push the two kingdoms to the brink of war. According to a number of ancient prophecies, the humans are doomed, unless a mysterious "warrior" from the overland aids them on their quests.

Gregor has no desire to be this "warrior," nor fulfill any prophecy. But fate intervenes, and he has no choice. Soon he and Boots are off and running with the brave and arrogant Luxa, bonded bats devoted to their humans, friendly cockroaches, and even a wise-cracking rat with hidden motives for joining the humans. From a rescue mission deep inside the rat kingdom to a sea voyage into a labyrinth to a search for life-saving medicine in a poisonous jungle, Gregor's adventures will bring out abilities he never knew he had. Perhaps this peace-loving boy really can be the warrior.

Series Review

I find the writing of Suzanne Collins (author of The Hunger Games) addicting. After reading Gregor the Overlander, the first of The Underland Chronicles, I felt compelled to get my hands on the second book. Wisely, I ordered the next four books of The Underland Chronicles together, and when they finally arrived, I devoured them one after the other, like chocolate truffles in a sampler box.


It probably has to do with the way Suzanne Collins builds the suspense. Gregor has become the caretaker of his family; every minute he stays in Underland, he causes worry to his mother and leaves dependent members of the family to fend for themselves. Of course Underland has problems of its own, and there's almost always some kind of crisis going on which requires the warrior, as well as a prophecy predicting that things will get much, much worse. Now the prophecies tend to be cryptic and subject to more than one interpretation, so even when you think you know where it's going, you probably don't.

All this is enough to keep the pages turning. But then we're introduced to our companions. Most of them don't get along, are hiding secrets, are mortal enemies, or all of the above. The quest sets off, and there's action, action, and more action, pausing only enough to get to know our new friends. But be careful who you grow to like, because characters die constantly—at least one in every book. And even after the crisis has been averted, the underlying hostilities between rats and humans are still boiling hot.

The interesting thing is that Gregor, though named the Warrior, is probably one of the most peaceful characters in the books. He doesn't have the same prejudice as the Underlanders and is willing to accept almost all of his companions. He's quick to apologize, quick to forgive, quick to come to the aid of anyone he thinks is being bullied or treated unfairly. He's not always perfect, but he's willing to understand. He's a genuinely good guy.

And like all good guys, he gets put through the wringer. I'm starting to think Katniss had it easy compared to all that Gregor had to go through. Not only is he an unarmed kid pitted against monstrous rats and told to carry out prophecies he can't understand, he has to do it while babysitting a toddler. Most of the adults don't care a whit for his safety. If they're not shoving him into dangerous quests or expecting him to fight in a war, they're locking him in dungeons or trying to stone him. And these are the "good guys."

This should give you an idea that while talking animals and rhyming prophecies sound all very cute, this is actually a pretty intense series. The main themes are war and peace, and the books deal with such light and fluffy subjects as child soldiers, biological warfare, and genocide. All the while characters are decapitated, devoured alive by mites, suffocated, and thrown to their deaths. I swear, if these weren't animals dying, this book would be slapped with an R rating.

Don't get me wrong; it's not that I don't think kids can handle it. It just gets dark and depressing at time, especially in the last two books.

I'm a little torn with how the series ended. On the one hand, threads from as early as Book 2 got tied into the ending, nice and neat. But then there were some things I thought were being set-up—interesting characters, new skills—that either didn't go anywhere or ended up being too little, too late. 

Moreover, the story ended on a bit of a depressing note. For as much as it was teased that peace might be possibly, war ultimately reigned, and it was sad and violent and morally ambiguous. Realistic? Perhaps. But in a kid’s book about giant talking animals, I’d prefer a little fantasy.

Book Review: Gregor and the Code of the Claw



Title: Gregor and the Code of the Claw (Book 5 of The Underland Chronicles)
Author: Suzanne Collins
Genre: Middle Grade Reader, Fantasy, Adventure


Summary

The war has been declared,
Your ally is ensnared.
It is now or it is never.
Break the code or die forever.

Nobody wants Gregor to see the Prophecy of Time. But now he has no choice. War has broken out between the humans and the rats, and the prophecy may be the human's only chance of surviving. But something dark lurks between these words.

Time is running out,
Running out,
Running out.

"If you were to return home after you read the prophecy, I would not hold it against you."

How could she say that to Gregor? How could she not know that Underland has become Gregor's home, that he would do anything to save it. Nothing could make him leave it, not now, not when they need the warrior the most.

And then Gregor reads the line, and time comes to a stop.

Review

(I'll try not to spoil anything, if you promise not to be a good guesser.)

The whole book is nothing but war. If you like constant battles and killing, you may enjoy it.

Personally, I don't care for it. Instead of adventure, we get numbing amounts of violence, a high body count, and practically a guarantee that we will lose several beloved characters. (Pray that your favorite doesn't get the boot.) Also, there's a lot of waiting between the battles. Sometimes the characters are ordered to wait; sometimes they're healing from injuries.

The only real relief is the surprise appearance of a character who's been lingering in the background for a while now, severely underutilized. Finally this character has a role to play in the plot. Yay! This character also develops a relationship with Ripred, the wily rat warrior who fights for the humans, which ends up being very sweet. We also finally get some information on Ripred's past.

One thing that bothered me was the weary conclusion of the theme of war and peace. To expand, in Book 3, Hamnet introduced a philosophy that you didn't have to kill—you could try other things first. This is echoed in a key moment, during a fight in Book 4. In Book 5, Gregor has a moment where he goes too far. So with all of this, I kept hoping that he’d find a way to end it that didn’t involve violence.

But that didn’t happen. He goes off to kill the bad guy. The end.

And while there is peace after the war, it's that kind of exhausted peace that comes when everyone has died—and even then, the moment is very nearly ruined with vengeance and bickering.

As in all of The Underland Chronicles, you can expect page-turning suspense, action a-plenty, lovable characters, intense violence, and death. Probably best suited for older elementary and up.

Book Review: Gregor and the Marks of Secret



Title: Gregor and the Marks of Secret (Book 4 of The Underland Chronicles)
Author: Suzanne Collins
Genre: Middle Grade Reader, Fantasy, Adventure

Summary

Bat, bat,
Come under my hat,
I will give you a slice of bacon,
And when I bake, I will give you a cake,
If I am not mistaken.

For once, there's no prophecy. Instead, Gregor (twelve now) comes to Underland to beat the New York heat, hang out with his friends, sing silly songs, dance, and attend royal birthday parties. It turns out that without all those nasty wars threatening to break out, Underland is a pretty cool place.

Now the guests are at the door
Greet them as we have before.
Some will slice and some will pour.
Father, mother, sister brother,
Off they go, I do not know
If we will see another.

Unfortunately, the good times don't last. When friends send an urgent plea for help, Gregor finds himself on yet another quest. The mice are disappearing, and the only clue they’ve left behind is an ominous mark scratched on the floor. As Gregor and his friends follow the trail, they come across a dark and horrifying secret that will change the fate of Underland forever.

Review

First, you need to know that this is essentially Part 1 of a two-parter. A lot of this book is set-up for Book 5, and the ending is less than conclusive. If that sort of thing bothers you, I really recommend making sure you have Book 5 ready.

The beginning of the book is a bit slow, as there's no crisis and no clear prophecy to ratchet up the tension. But as soon as the quest starts, we find ourselves with plenty of action and danger... and, for the first time, a bit of romance... to keep the story moving. And then we find out about the mice and things go very dark, very quickly.

A little thing that bugged me was that there were a few too many natural disasters in the book. It seemed like every time the pace threatened to slow, some raging element was thrown in the hero's direction: fire, water, wind, earth—take your pick. It was starting to strain at my suspension of disbelief.

The rats were back to being evil here—evil with a vengeance—and that sort of makes me sad. But really the problem is one particular rat. Now, in Book 2, Gregor made a decision that was morally correct, in my opinion, but the consequences seem to be horrific. Would he have been better off making the other decision? The book doesn’t really dwell on it much, but I feel like it should have.

As in all of The Underland Chronicles, you can expect page-turning suspense, action a-plenty, lovable characters, intense violence, and death. Probably best suited for older elementary and up.

Book Review: Gregor and the Curse of the Warmbloods



Title: Gregor and the Curse of the Warmbloods (Book 3 of The Underland Chronicles)
Author: Suzanne Collins
Genre: Middle Grade Reader, Fantasy, Adventure

Summary

Warmblood now a bloodborne death
Will rob your body of its breath,
Mark your skin, and seal your fate,
The Underland becomes a plate.

When a plague wracks all warm-blooded creatures of the Underland, rat and human alike, Gregor is summoned. He's ready to leap into action. His mother is another story. Twice her son has disappeared to the Underland, and she's not going to let it happen again. Unfortunately, fate has a way of intervening.

Turn and turn and turn again,
You see the what but not the when.
Remedy and wrong entwine,
And so they form a single vine.

This prophecy will take Gregor and his companion to the Vineyard of Eyes, the only place where the plant that may hold the cure grows. It seems like a straight-forward quest. But Gregor has been through enough of these prophecies to know that there's always a catch. Something is off, and if he doesn't figure it out, the plague just may do away with everyone he loves.

Review

This one could be called "Sympathy for the Rats," because man, do you start to feel sorry for them. First, we learn that they're starving because the humans have taken over their food supplies. Then we learn that the plague is carried by the fleas, and the humans have flea powder, but refuse to share it with the rats, even though the plague affects them all and they should be on the same side. All the books thus far have introduced a sympathetic rat character, and this book is no different, having Lapblood and Mange. When you learn why they're on the quest, it's enough to break your heart.

One disappointing thing is Gregor's mother. She could have been such a cool character. I mean, single handedly feeding her family, having to deal with the disappearance of her son and daughter—twice. When I learned she'd be traveling to Underland (by reading the back of the book), I was excited to think of her going with Gregor on adventures, adding a new dynamic, maybe easing some of the pressure off the poor boy. Unfortunately, nothing of that sort happens. She acts like a typical mom, humiliating Gregor and exhibiting little personality, and then gets conveniently pushed aside for the sake of the plot.

But there were other interesting new characters, most notably Hamnet, the uncle of Luxa who willingly banished himself from the capital. He, aside from Gregor, seems to be one of the few people who don't innately hate rats and tries to live in peace. Hamnet offers a glimpse of a different way of running the kingdom.

Oh, and if you were wondering about the fate of the important characters left hanging in the balance in Book 2, well, let's just say that you have to get halfway through the book to find out.

As in all of The Underland Chronicles, you can expect page-turning suspense, action a-plenty, lovable characters, intense violence, and death. Probably best suited for older elementary and up.