Wednesday, September 30, 2015
Welcome to the World, Leilani
Today, September 30th, at 2PM, my cousin Mitchell and his wife Krystal, became the parents of baby Leilani Ishizu. Congrats to them both on their lovely little girl.
Weekly Update: 9-30-15 Schizophrenia and Taco Tuesdays
Announcement: I will be selling copies of THE CHANGELINGS as well as a few of my homemade cards at the El Dorado High School Holiday Boutique (1651 Valencia Ave., Placentia) from 10-11 this Saturday, October 3rd. Various local authors to sign from 9:00-3:00.
Announcement: On Saturday, October 10, NAMI is hosting a 5k Walk in William R. Macy Park (1810 E 17th St.,Santa Ana, California 92705) at 10:00 AM (check-in begins at 8:00) to raise money and awareness for Mental Illness.
Announcement: On Saturday, October 10, NAMI is hosting a 5k Walk in William R. Macy Park (1810 E 17th St.,Santa Ana, California 92705) at 10:00 AM (check-in begins at 8:00) to raise money and awareness for Mental Illness.
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Since the beginning of September, my mom, dad, and I have been attending a "Family-to-Family" class hosted by NAMI (National Alliance on Mental Illness). The class educated people with a family member who is mentally ill about everything from the types of diseases and medicines, to communication and problem-solving techniques, to where to go during a crisis.
My younger sister Jaime has recently been diagnosed with schizophrenia. This is only a small surprise as she was diagnosed with schizoaffective disorder as early as high school and has since bounced around with everything from social anxiety, depression, and PTSD. Naming the disease is actually a relief, since it means I can sit down and research it.
(This website offers a good insight into mental illness by portraying them as pokemon-esque monsters: http://www.earthporm.com/real-monsters/?utm_rcreplace_392=4650)
I should have researched it in high school, when symptoms first broke out. That was the crisis time, when it first came to light that my sister heard voices telling her to do violent things. At that time, though, I was senior in high school and it was my first experience of life going off the rails and I didn't know how to handle it. Later, I went to college and then to Japan, and my sister's condition began to stabilize, and I just sort of assumed she was okay.
But even though she's managing her disease, it hasn't gone away. So my mother suggested we all take the free class to learn about it.
Every Tuesday, my parents drive down from Victorville. We go to Rubios for their $2 fish tacos and attend the class together. And I have to admit, it hasn't exactly been a breeze. Some of the people attending the class have family members who are homeless or in jail. The heaviness of their sorrows sink into the soul. At the same time, it frightens me, since schizophrenia is a degenerative disease, which means it may get worse.
But a few things have made it more bearable:
1. Tacos! It's actually nice to go out to dinner with my family and spend time together, just hanging out and talking. We're scheduling in family time weekly, something I haven't done in forever.
2. Doodling. During class, when either the instructors are speaking or other people in the class are sharing, and I start feeling overwhelmed, I just start sketching. I'm still listening, but the drawing acts as a pressure valve, alleviating some of my stress. And, as it turns out, doodling actually helps pay attention. So there you go.
3. Understanding. It didn't exactly happen all at once. After a month of info dump, listening to other people's stories, and reading on my own, I'm only just starting to piece things together. What really helped was hearing about it from my sister herself, which tied everything together.
One of the saddest things about mental illness is the stigma society attaches to it. If were to say my sister had brain cancer, it would cause an outpouring of pity. Schizophrenia sounds scary. Yet it is a disease. It eats away at brain tissue and causes the body to deteriorate. What's frightening about mental illness is that it shatters our illusion of control. We figure that, if nothing else, we are masters of our own mind. But if we lose our ability to reason, if we start to hallucinate, if the words we hear no longer make sense, how much control do we have?
This seems like a heavy, depressing topic. I guess there's no way around that. But the awesome thing about humanity is how they can adapt to almost anything, even turning negatives into positives. My sister uses art to express how schizophrenia affects her life. For me, just learning about what's going on, forces me to deal with my own fears and insensitivities. Yes, I'd like to live in blissful ignorance, but facing a "hard" situation and walking away with knowledge, makes me feel powerful. If I'm not in control, at least I'm aware of what's going on.
"Cup Full of Love and Happiness" by Jaime Lang |
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After ending last week with a couple of subbing jobs, I spent all of Saturday making cards. I've been getting digital stamps off Etsy, particularly from a seller called Aurora Wings. After the mess of colored pencils, paper, and glue had cleared, I ended up with 20 new cards, 5 of which were quickly claimed by my mother. Sadly, this is only the beginning of card-making season, as Christmas is right around the corner.
Some of my new cards. |
For anyone interested, this page has good resources for preparing for Nanowrimo: http://nanowrimo.org/nano-prep
Friday, September 25, 2015
Winning Nanowrimo: Gathering Support
But I don't need support? you say. I'm an independent person.
So
am I.
But
having friends helps, especially if you've never done Nanowrimo before. At the
very least, it's good to know others are out there struggling with you. And at
best, it could be the difference between failure and success.
What Do You Need?
Affirmation
Sometimes
you need a little praise, a little inspiration, a little pat on the back. You
need to know your writing matters and others are rooting for you to succeed.
Find supportive writers, friends, and family to cheer you on when you meet a
goal, to write you emails encouraging you to keep at it, or to plan a
celebration with.
Accountability
On
the other end of the stick, sometimes it's good to have a person to remind you
of your goals and to keep you to them. You can check in with a writing partner
or even a strict friend every day or every week. If you don't report, they'll
start asking you what's going on. Having someone to answer to can be a powerful
motivator.
Mentorship
If
you're just starting off, it might help to meet with someone who's gone before
you, who knows the rapids. Maybe you need advice. Maybe you just need
reassurance that the challenges you face are completely normal. If you don't
know anyone personally, you can check the groups on nanowrimo.org
Company
Extraverts
thrive by being around others, and even introverts need to get out every now
and then. Arrange meet times with other writers at your cafes or libraries to
sit and write together. You can also talk about how Nanowrimo's been working
out--but not too long. Remember, writing comes first!
Competition
A
little friendly competition can create a push in the right kind of person. When
I started off, my friend Michelle sent daily emails with the word count of all
her friends. I began to quietly compete to have the highest daily word count
and be the first to finish. (I came in second.) Another friendly way to
compete: a word sprint. Whoever writes the most words in half an hour wins!
Free Time
If
you have a busy schedule, you might have to draw on friends and family to help
you out with chores and everyday nuisances while you put your energy into
writing. It helps, for example, to have someone to babysit, so that you can
have an hour to yourself to write. Maybe ask someone else to make that
Thanksgiving turkey for you.
Nanowrimo.org
Whether
or not you have a support group already, nanowrimo.org
is a great resource to help you out. It's free. Sign in and create an account
for your book. You'll then have access to the following:
Word Tracker
There's
a little box at the top of your page for you to enter your accumulative word
count. You can enter as many times as you want each day. Once your number is
in, a little chart shows you how many words you've written, whether or not
you're on schedule, and how many words per day you need to write to finish.
This
little tool is my whole reason for registering. I'm addicted to entering my
word count and watching my graph go up. I end up "competing" with the
"daily word count," a rival graph that gets in his exact 1667 words
each day. I always want to get ahead of it.
Pep Talks
You
get pep talks now and then throughout the year, but once November comes, every
single day you get a note in your Nanowrimo inbox with words of advice and
encouragement. And some of those authors are pretty famous. I've gotten letters
from some of my fantasy idols. It's not as personal as an email from your
friend, but it's nice to know that published authors also share your pain.
Find Local Writers
You
can find specific writers on Nanowrimo and join a local groups for write-ins,
word sprints, raffles, and more. This is a great option for more social
writers.
Prizes
If
you write 50,000 words at the end of the month, you have the option of
verifying it. You copy and paste your entire text into the browser. No human
eyes will look at it. They simply count the words and delete the document.
Once
you hit 50,000 words, you get a badge and various writing-related prizes. I've
seen anything from free online books to deep discounts on writing programs. I
don't know how often I've used my free prizes... but it's nice to know I've got
them, you know.
Thursday, September 24, 2015
Weekly Update: 9-24-15 A Normal Week
Announcement: A copy of my first novel, The Changelings, is now available in the library of Brea Olinda High School. For anyone who attends the school, please check it out.
Further Announcement: I'll be selling limited paperback copies of my book at a pop-up boutique in El Dorado High School on October 3rd, from 10:00-11:00. More details to come.
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I'd love it if every time I wrote this blog, I could entertain you with fascinating adventures, beautiful description, or profound thoughts on life. Unfortunately, I'm human and some (a lot) of my weeks are just plain boring.
Last week, for example, I attended a tax seminar on Tuesday. Now for a select few people in desperate need of information on sales tax in Orange County, it was fascinating. (And for those select few people, I spent most of Wednesday typing up a very thorough blog post, which I'll publish some time in October.) For me, it consumed my writing time and writing energy and was as pleasant as a toothache.
At least I got a short story out of a toothache.
By Thursday, taxes had gotten me so far off schedule, I just threw my hands in the air and yelled, "to hell with it!" (In my head, anyway. As a rule I try not to yell unless something truly atrocious happened. Like when a writer butchers a good book with a bad ending.) I read Three Act Tragedy by Agatha Christie. I should have known better. I have a Christie compulsion. I must read three of her books at one time, or bad things happen.
The bad thing that happened was me obsessively hunting down episodes of Agatha Christie's Poirot on YouTube. All Friday and most of Saturday, I endured annoying side-screens and footage with the bottom layer cut off, but I didn't care. The reptile part of my brain had awakened and craved the blood-spatter of early 20th-century, polite upper-middle class British society.
On Sunday my dad had a retirement party at Ferrell's. I struggled to regain my sanity.
By the time Monday morning opened its bleary, bloodshot eyes, I knew I must atone. I hadn't written a word of my story since Thursday. The guilt weighed on my soul. So, forsaking all others, I toiled laborously on 8 chapters of Three Floating Coffins, until the pendulum had swung in the other direction. I'd worked and overworked myself. I felt balanced and satisfied.
And that, I suppose, is a pretty typical week. Bouts of productivity, bouts of writing, bouts of procrastination. I thought to extract some moral from the last one: the virtue of solitude, the necessity of refreshing the soul. But, oh, why bother. I got lazy and felt bad about it. End of story.
Further Announcement: I'll be selling limited paperback copies of my book at a pop-up boutique in El Dorado High School on October 3rd, from 10:00-11:00. More details to come.
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I'd love it if every time I wrote this blog, I could entertain you with fascinating adventures, beautiful description, or profound thoughts on life. Unfortunately, I'm human and some (a lot) of my weeks are just plain boring.
I try so hard to be interesting, but then my true nature reveals itself. |
At least I got a short story out of a toothache.
By Thursday, taxes had gotten me so far off schedule, I just threw my hands in the air and yelled, "to hell with it!" (In my head, anyway. As a rule I try not to yell unless something truly atrocious happened. Like when a writer butchers a good book with a bad ending.) I read Three Act Tragedy by Agatha Christie. I should have known better. I have a Christie compulsion. I must read three of her books at one time, or bad things happen.
It's an addiction. |
On Sunday my dad had a retirement party at Ferrell's. I struggled to regain my sanity.
By the time Monday morning opened its bleary, bloodshot eyes, I knew I must atone. I hadn't written a word of my story since Thursday. The guilt weighed on my soul. So, forsaking all others, I toiled laborously on 8 chapters of Three Floating Coffins, until the pendulum had swung in the other direction. I'd worked and overworked myself. I felt balanced and satisfied.
Yay for work! |
Saturday, September 19, 2015
Winning Nanowrimo: Crunchtober
Crunch
what?
Crunchtober
is a word that combines "Crunch" and "October" and has the
general meaning of "October is crunch time." From what I understand,
some Nanowrimo writers use October to practice for November's writing marathon
by writing 500 words a day on random prompts.
But
I usually eschew prompts in order to brainstorm my novel. I spend about an hour
a day, five days a week brainstorming, and I need every bit of it.
My Approach
I
start with a blank word document or a new composition book.
Day
1, I write a brief summary of my idea and everything I know will happen in the
novel. Then I write down every question I have, every problem I'm concerned with.
The
next day I start solving them.
I
look at the questions that might come up during the beginning of the story and
I pick the most important one. Then I start brainstorming. I write
stream-of-conscience. I throw out multiple solutions and see what sticks. I may
even do some research. I might draw.
If
other ideas or questions come up, I write those down as well.
If
I hit upon a solution, I write a little summary of it at the bottom of the
page, so that I can come back and read it again quickly. If I have extra time,
I go on to the next question. If I get stuck, I go on to the next question.
If
I don't find a solution that day, I may come back the next day and work on it—but
usually no more than that.
In
the second week, I should be moving to the middle of the story. By the end of
the third week, I should be starting on the ending.
In
the last few days of October, I read through all my notes and begin to put it
together into a rough outline. Usually I do a "Table of Contents,"
and list what I think happens in each chapter. If I have any questions, I add
those in as well, hoping that my subconscious brain will solve them somewhere
in the frenzy of writing.
By
the end of the month, I have a rough guide to my story.
And
that's how I use October to prepare.
Know Thyself
Whether
or not you use my method, the concept of practicing for Nanowrimo is an
important one. First, it lessens the shock of writing, and prepares you
physically and mentally. Second, as you write, you begin to pick up on your own
habits and preferences.
Here
are some questions to ponder in October, so that when November arrives, you'll
be ready to apply them to your writing life.
Where and when do you best write?
Do
you have a certain room you like to write in? Do you prefer a cafe? Do you work
better with other people present? Alone? Do you prefer music? Silence? Do you
like to write in the morning? At night? 15 minute sprints or 5 hour marathons? Coffee
or tea?
For
example, I like to write at home, spread out over the floor. I prefer to write
in the morning, from about 8:00 until noon. I like to do marathon sessions of
at least three hours and find it hard to hit a flow in anything less than an
hour. I prefer working 5 days a week and having the weekends off.
Can you adapt if conditions aren't
ideal?
Hopefully,
at least some of the 30 days, you will be able to write during ideal
conditions; on those days, you milk it for all its worth. But if you're looking
for the perfect hour, place, and mood, you won't have enough time to scrabble
together your manuscript.
In
that case, can you work in less than ideal conditions? Late at night? Early in
the morning? Distracted? You might not be able to adapt to all conditions. If
the TV is on, my writing suffers. Know what you can adapt to and what you
cannot.
How efficient are you at writing?
A
simple trick: time yourself.
Set
a timer for 15 minutes, half hour, an hour, and see how many words you write by
the end of it. Or, start at 0 words, set a clock, and see how long it takes you
to get to 100, 500, or 1000 words. Bear in mind, results will vary based on how
inspired you are at the time.
My
maximum efficiency is approximately 1000 words in an hour, but it goes down to
an hour and a half if I'm tired or stuck. This means that in week, I need to
find between 12 1/2 to 15 hours for Nanowrimo.
How can you fit writing into your
schedule?
Most
of us don't have the luxury of infinite. I work as a substitute teacher, and if
I can't get work that day, I write. Yet even with my flexible schedule, I still
struggle to find enough time to write. Even without jobs, we all have
commitments.
One writer described how she found fifteen minutes here, fifteen minutes there, and
that these added up to quite a bit of time. That's definitely a good strategy.
But for such a momentous task as Nanowrimo, that might not be enough.
What sacrifices will you need to make?
Obviously,
you shouldn't sacrifice your first-born child or anything like that. But you
may have to do without that guilty pleasure reality TV show or lose fifteen
minutes of extra sleep each morning. You may have to live off quick cooked
meals, live with a messy house, and hire a dog-walker for the month. You may
have to cancel social activities for the weekend--yes, maybe even the ones
relating to writing. You may have to... shudder... let your mother-in-law host
Thanksgiving.
What kind of support do you need?
You
might not be able to do it alone. In that case, gather your writing partners
and your cheerleader companions close.
For
more about that, tune in next week for: GATHERING SUPPORT
Monday, September 14, 2015
Weekly Update: 9-14-15 S'mores
Living in Southern California, you'd imagine that going to the beach was the easiest thing in the world. But perhaps because the beach is so close, I take it for granted. And so the summer passed, and I had yet to walk barefooted on the soft sands or feel the froth of the collapsing waves.
Then my friend Ashly invited me to a Meet-up Bonfire at Huntington Beach.
What I wanted more than anything was S'mores. It had been ages since I'd properly roasted a marshmallow until it puffed and browned and then smooshed the sticky white puff between two squares of graham crackers and a stick of chocolate. I was in.
Ashley brought her light-up hula hoop.
I'd never done a Meet-up before. With nearly a hundred and fifty people, it was quite a party, and I knew no one. But at least I had Ashley. She broke the ice by showing off her hooping ability. Everyone brought a pot luck dinner, and I scooped up udon salad, cheese and crackers, fried chicken, deviled eggs, chips and dip, and homemade apple cobbler with peanuts on top, which disappeared almost as soon as it was laid on the table.
Bonfires were lit. Some people put hot dogs on two-pronged skewers and roasted them over the flames until moisture dripped off the sausage like beads of sweat. Me, I was the first one to the S'mores table, fitting my marshmallows to a bamboo skewer.
After all these years. Satisfaction at last.
Ashley and I went down to the shore right as the setting sun turned the sky pink. She hooped at the waters edge, practically daring the waves to push her down. It looked like a ritual. I just stood there. Ashley and I had been best friends since the age of five. If we were still kids, we would say that she was using magic to open a portal into the ocean's realm. We'd enter through the hula hoop, and she'd become a dolphin and I'd become a mermaid and we'd save a seashell castle from destruction.
When it got dark, we socialized with other people.
I went home with sand coating my skin and my hair smelling like ash.
* * *
Heat waves are awful when you have no air conditioning. Sitting in my house was like sitting in an oven. An oven set to 165 degrees, perhaps, but an oven nonetheless. Not being a wad of biscuit dough, I found that the heat did not inspire me to rise. I parked under the fan and tried not to move.
Surprisingly, I felt inspired to edit Three Floating Coffins. In a way, I was procrastinating the more odious task of researching my Fullerton credential. But if I had to procrastinate, it was a fine method. I re-wrote 2 chapters, line-edited 3 chapters, and typed in corrections for 2 chapters.
Editing is extremely time-consuming; you can easily spend an hour going over a single page. But while I was so focused on editing, I managed to "tune-out" the heat. Thus, by editing, I survived last week's heat wave.
I got some reprise from the heat when I got a subbing job on Thursday at Brea Olinda High School. It was awesome seeing the students again. And perhaps I'll get paid this month. Bonus.
Then my friend Ashly invited me to a Meet-up Bonfire at Huntington Beach.
Photo by Chika |
Ashley brought her light-up hula hoop.
Photo by Jeni |
Bonfires were lit. Some people put hot dogs on two-pronged skewers and roasted them over the flames until moisture dripped off the sausage like beads of sweat. Me, I was the first one to the S'mores table, fitting my marshmallows to a bamboo skewer.
After all these years. Satisfaction at last.
Ashley and I went down to the shore right as the setting sun turned the sky pink. She hooped at the waters edge, practically daring the waves to push her down. It looked like a ritual. I just stood there. Ashley and I had been best friends since the age of five. If we were still kids, we would say that she was using magic to open a portal into the ocean's realm. We'd enter through the hula hoop, and she'd become a dolphin and I'd become a mermaid and we'd save a seashell castle from destruction.
I went home with sand coating my skin and my hair smelling like ash.
* * *
Heat waves are awful when you have no air conditioning. Sitting in my house was like sitting in an oven. An oven set to 165 degrees, perhaps, but an oven nonetheless. Not being a wad of biscuit dough, I found that the heat did not inspire me to rise. I parked under the fan and tried not to move.
Surprisingly, I felt inspired to edit Three Floating Coffins. In a way, I was procrastinating the more odious task of researching my Fullerton credential. But if I had to procrastinate, it was a fine method. I re-wrote 2 chapters, line-edited 3 chapters, and typed in corrections for 2 chapters.
Editing is extremely time-consuming; you can easily spend an hour going over a single page. But while I was so focused on editing, I managed to "tune-out" the heat. Thus, by editing, I survived last week's heat wave.
I got some reprise from the heat when I got a subbing job on Thursday at Brea Olinda High School. It was awesome seeing the students again. And perhaps I'll get paid this month. Bonus.
Friday, September 11, 2015
Winning Nanowrimo: Creating an Outline
I
hate outlines.
If
you can figure out Plot Points #1-10 (or #1-20, or #1-64, or whatever) in one
sitting, congratulations! You can outline better than I ever could. I get, at
best, halfway down the list before I get stuck and then it takes me until the
end of October to figure out the climax.
They
remind me of essays in English class, with a thesis statement, three supporting
arguments, and a conclusion at the end. What a bother. I'm what's known as a
Pantser: I don't know what I'm going to write until I've written it; I fly by
the seat of my pants. In English class, I always wrote the outlines after I finished the essay.
But
for Nanowrimo, I write outlines.
Or
rather, I brainstorm ideas for my novel, so that if I hit a blank wall during
Nanowrimo, I still have something to write. And then I try to organize those
ideas into a logical sequence, so I don't get confused. That's my outline.
Outlines
don't have to be permanent. That's what I like about them. At any time I like,
I can ditch them and go off script. But if I don't have a script and get stuck,
that's when panic sets in and panic can be deadly.
Plot
My
plot outline is simple. I need at least ten important events. These events
should take the form of scenes and should, if possible, take place in the
present. No flashbacks, no backstory.
Event
#1 should be the inciting incident--the thing that gets the ball rolling.
Whatever that first idea that popped into your head was.
Somewhere
between Event #2 and #9, you should include two reversals. Things seem to be
going along in a straight line, then, bam,
the road turns. The lovers are about to admit their feelings, when, bam, in waltzes the jealous ex. The
detective thinks he's discovered the murderer when, bam, that suspect ends up dead. Death, betrayal, loss, scandal,
secrets... these things work well.
Event
#9 and #10 should probably be the climax and resolution. The resolution is
optional, but the climax is not. What is the high point in the novel? What's
the big action blowout, the big reveal, or the heart-wrenching emotion?
As
a rule, the more specific, the better. Your climax might be: good guy kills bad
guy, and that's great. But why does he kill him? And where? And how? What makes
the scene new and exciting and dramatic?
I
like to bombard my scenes with as many questions as I can think of, in order to
give myself the clearest possible picture of what's going on.
Once
you figure out at least some of the events, the next thing to do is figure out
what order they go in and how they connect together. This often takes a while.
You might know for sure that Andy and Melissa meet in Oklahoma, but two scenes
later, they're dodging assassin’s bullets in Paris. Great! Just figure out how
it happened.
Have
ten key events? Know how they fit together?
Congratulations.
You have an outline.
Characters
Of
course, a novel is more than a plot. There should be solid characters at the
heart of any good stories. In fact, the more you know the characters, the
better chance you have of getting the plot to work.
The
best way you can get to know the characters is by asking them questions. You
can find some thorough character questionnaires out there, asking you to fill
in everything from their favorite music to their blood type, but we don't have
all day, so I've boiled it down to the essentials.
What do they look like?
Age
and gender are always good. After that, focus on any physical trait that might
be crucial to the story. Like if, say, your girl has wings. Or if your warrior
is missing a hand. Even things like height and build might be important in an
action story.
Who/ what do they love?
When
a character loves someone, anyone, they become very relatable and we empathize
with them. Love also gives them stakes. What are they willing to do for the
person they love? How will they act if that loved one is in danger?
For
a villain, you might twist this around into, "Who do they hate?"
What do they desire?
This
gives the characters motivation. Motivation is crucial to the story, because it
forces the character to take action. Without action, a story dies.
What do they fear?
If
the character isn't motivated by action, they may be motivated by fear. Also,
knowing the character's fears gives you a good idea of what kind of obstacles
to present them. Putting a character with a fear of heights on a cliff adds to
the drama.
What do they believe in?
Belief
helps when it comes to developing a book’s theme. Usually a belief will be
tested, and either triumph or lead the character to change. A minor example
might be the heroine who thinks she'll never fall in love, right before Prince
Charming sweeps her off her feet.
What's their background/ history?
You
don't necessarily have to share this with the readers (and you certainly don't
need a big flashback) but a little personal history will help you understand why
the character acts the way he does. Look at family and defining moments in his
life.
What’s their greatest secret?
Secrets
are so useful. Hint that a character has a secret and your audience will be
fascinated. Reveal a secret, and you cause shock, scandal, betrayal, angst, and
other fun emotions.
Setting
When
you look at setting, you might want to start by getting a broad view of where
and when you are. For example, you might consider thinking about:
Time Frame
how
long does the story take place: days? months? years?
any
noticeable time gaps?
Physical Landscape
city,
suburb, or country
the
shape of the land: mountains and valleys
bodies
of water
nature:
plants and animals
buildings
and man-made environments
Era/ Culture
clothes:
how does it express their culture?
objects:
what things are commonly used?
technology
politics
religion
Seasons/ Weather
clothes:
how does it protect them from the elements?
holidays
dangers
But
after you have a general idea, it helps to take a closer look at three specific
places where scenes take place. This could be anything from a house, a room, a
cafe, a fortress, a spaceship, a volcano. Whatever catches your interest.
Try
developing three specific places. You might already know how these places play
a role in the plot or you may not. It might help to develop the place first and
figure out what to do with it later.
Look
around your specific place. What objects surround you? What can be used to help
or hinder the hero? Is there anything that holds metaphoric value? How might
landscape and weather affect the hero's actions?
More Information?
If
you want to learn more about my brainstorming techniques, see this article "Brainstorming: Finding Where Your At"
If
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Week: CRUNCHTOBER
Tuesday, September 8, 2015
Weekly Update: 9-8-15 Tragedies, Shakespearian and Otherwise
This week might have been a tragedy.
Hermoine, my aunt's the Sheltie/ German Shepherd mix, had been hobbling and limping the previous week, looking as pitiful as could be. They took her to the vet, and the vet said that her disks were fusing together and pinching a nerve. My aunt and uncle spoke of putting her down by the end of the week.
Even though Hermoine isn't technically my dog, I'd lived with my aunt and uncle for roughly four years, during which time I'd formed a strong bond with the dog. I had petted Hermoine and brushed her long fur and walked her and used her as an eager garbage disposal for my leftovers. The thought of losing her cast a depressing pall over my week.
Fortunately, as we steadily administered medicine, we saw Hermoine become more energetic. Her slight limp didn't stop her from jogging up to us at the slightest sound of food. My aunt and uncle decided that, even though her medical problems hadn't gone away, she didn't seem to be in too much pain. So, for now at least, the decision to put her down has been delayed. For how long, I don't yet know, but I'm much relieved.
There's still life in this old dog yet.
* * *
"I hate Shakespeare," said twelve year old me, who had never even attempted to read it. "All those fancy, pretentious words. And what's with Romeo and Juliet falling in love and killing themselves over it? That's the worst play. Maybe MacBeth might be interesting, but Romeo and Juliet? Yuck."
Ah, irony.
It gets you in the end.
This Sunday, I went to see Romeo and Juliet in Griffith Park--of my own free will. Actually, that's too mild a phrase. I canvassed to see it. I dragged my parents to see it. And I enjoyed it. Mushy stuff and all. The production was really well done. The actor playing Mercutio wrung humor out of the famously long-winded "Queen Mab" speech, and the actress playing Juliet captured the vulnerability of a young girl.
I've begun to appreciate Shakespeare in my old age. I don't think Shakespeare was pretentious--I think that five centuries of changing language makes his stuff difficult to read. But if you can get past that, the man knew how to write. Love, sex, violence, drama, humor, poetry--he could do it all. It's funny how reading his plays can still shock me--me, a jaded Millenial from the Internet age.
Take King Lear, for instance, which I read for the first time in August. In one scene, an old man's eyes are gouged out. On stage. My mouth hung open. For some reason, we expect our classics to be clean and civilized. But read any Shakespeare tragedy, and blood will sput like an anime sword cut.
Shakespeare is a great thing when I want to feel smart, but I don't want to be bored or expend that much effort at reading. So far, I've read Romeo and Juliet, Julius Caesar, MacBeth, The Taming of the Shrew, Othello, A Midsummer's Night Dream, Much Ado About Nothing, King Richard III, The Merchant of Venice, Hamlet, As You Like It, The Tempest, and King Lear. (I've also seen The Merry Wives of Windsor and Twelfth Night.) This looks good and impressive, but it's not even half of what he wrote.
Should I attempt to read all Shakespeare's work?
Hm...
I still need to finish Jane Austen and Agatha Christie. But it does seem like a fun goal. Let's see, if I read three plays a year, I'll get through all of them in, hm, seven years or so? Wow. That's a lot of work. Guess I'd better get reading.
Hermoine, my aunt's the Sheltie/ German Shepherd mix, had been hobbling and limping the previous week, looking as pitiful as could be. They took her to the vet, and the vet said that her disks were fusing together and pinching a nerve. My aunt and uncle spoke of putting her down by the end of the week.
Even though Hermoine isn't technically my dog, I'd lived with my aunt and uncle for roughly four years, during which time I'd formed a strong bond with the dog. I had petted Hermoine and brushed her long fur and walked her and used her as an eager garbage disposal for my leftovers. The thought of losing her cast a depressing pall over my week.
Fortunately, as we steadily administered medicine, we saw Hermoine become more energetic. Her slight limp didn't stop her from jogging up to us at the slightest sound of food. My aunt and uncle decided that, even though her medical problems hadn't gone away, she didn't seem to be in too much pain. So, for now at least, the decision to put her down has been delayed. For how long, I don't yet know, but I'm much relieved.
There's still life in this old dog yet.
* * *
"I hate Shakespeare," said twelve year old me, who had never even attempted to read it. "All those fancy, pretentious words. And what's with Romeo and Juliet falling in love and killing themselves over it? That's the worst play. Maybe MacBeth might be interesting, but Romeo and Juliet? Yuck."
Ah, irony.
It gets you in the end.
This Sunday, I went to see Romeo and Juliet in Griffith Park--of my own free will. Actually, that's too mild a phrase. I canvassed to see it. I dragged my parents to see it. And I enjoyed it. Mushy stuff and all. The production was really well done. The actor playing Mercutio wrung humor out of the famously long-winded "Queen Mab" speech, and the actress playing Juliet captured the vulnerability of a young girl.
I've begun to appreciate Shakespeare in my old age. I don't think Shakespeare was pretentious--I think that five centuries of changing language makes his stuff difficult to read. But if you can get past that, the man knew how to write. Love, sex, violence, drama, humor, poetry--he could do it all. It's funny how reading his plays can still shock me--me, a jaded Millenial from the Internet age.
Take King Lear, for instance, which I read for the first time in August. In one scene, an old man's eyes are gouged out. On stage. My mouth hung open. For some reason, we expect our classics to be clean and civilized. But read any Shakespeare tragedy, and blood will sput like an anime sword cut.
Was Shakespeare the anime of it's time? |
Should I attempt to read all Shakespeare's work?
Hm...
I still need to finish Jane Austen and Agatha Christie. But it does seem like a fun goal. Let's see, if I read three plays a year, I'll get through all of them in, hm, seven years or so? Wow. That's a lot of work. Guess I'd better get reading.
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